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| [ The Empty Seat :: 2002-02-15
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The crowded bus plods slowly onward its set daily route never changing Some passengers sit, and others, they stand some make conversation engaging Some people climb on and others hop off at their same daily stops on the way One seat somehow remaining empty as if jinxed by some bad luck today It receives but a glance from those boarding who then stand at the opposite side Though when someone stands up when their stop comes then right into that seat someone slides The crowded bus plods ever onward continues its slow daily grind that empty seat always the oddball as if all of the riders are blind The next stop is mine, so I get off leaving empty seats now numbering two Like some U.S. states back in the 50's only its Japan and its 2002 |
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