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| [ Just What I Made :: 2005-10-13
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I don't like the taste of what I brewed myself tonight I put in what I wanted but it didn't come out right Its a bitter cup to drink, but will it make me feel alright? Oh yeah, its that empty place that I've locked myself into and now you're gone without a trace Baby, as your face begins to fade I wonder did I make it right because I got just what I made The hard times came and went and when they came around again I thought that it was time to end and now I'm standing in the rain I've got to take my medicine and see if it will stop the pain Oh yeah, its that empty place that I've locked myself into and now you're gone without a trace Baby, as your face begins to fade I wonder did I make it right because I got just what I made Time to take this cup and drink it all the way down I made it, I mixed it got to swallow it all now Hope for the best and maybe its all for the good somehow Oh yeah, its that empty place that I've locked myself into and now you're gone without a trace Baby, as your face begins to fade I wonder did I make it right because I got just what I made |
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