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[ Just What I Made :: 2005-10-13 ]
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I don't like the taste
of what I brewed myself tonight
I put in what I wanted
but it didn't come out right
Its a bitter cup to drink, but
will it make me feel alright?

Oh yeah, its that empty place
that I've locked myself into
and now you're gone without a trace
Baby, as your face begins to fade
I wonder did I make it right
because I got just what I made

The hard times came and went
and when they came around again
I thought that it was time to end
and now I'm standing in the rain
I've got to take my medicine
and see if it will stop the pain

Oh yeah, its that empty place
that I've locked myself into
and now you're gone without a trace
Baby, as your face begins to fade
I wonder did I make it right
because I got just what I made

Time to take this cup
and drink it all the way down
I made it, I mixed it
got to swallow it all now
Hope for the best and maybe
its all for the good somehow

Oh yeah, its that empty place
that I've locked myself into
and now you're gone without a trace
Baby, as your face begins to fade
I wonder did I make it right
because I got just what I made


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