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| [ Lunar Omen :: 2006-02-13
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The moon a burning sun, reddish in the Eastern sky rising, Mars-tinted Venus the silent herald's cry, its full orb a glowing omen, the lustful cry unspoken. Anticipation now awakened, and my eye blinks in conscious realization as my mind thinks. A palpitation in my heart reaching the brink of hope and love and lust. Will it all be traced in dust at the end? I now the restless child of that stern, hard Mother, Fate and solemn, stone-still Saturn, the two who ever make us wait to see what love and life and time will bring - the sweet nectar of love or a bitter sting. |
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