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| [ I Laughed :: 2002-02-22
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I laughed today for the first time in a week Things were all so bleak, I was full of dismay. I laughed today as I landed there, thrown somehow up and through the air by an old man smiling away. I hit the mat my body shocked my heart's pain somehow came unlocked by all of that. I laughed out loud the master's skill a strange release in dark despair a glint of peace he smiled and bowed a glowing light a strength anew a hope of somehow getting through life's darkest night I laughed today my body's back to getting me on solid track I'll be ok |
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