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| [ Seventeen :: 2007-02-06
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with the flash of a sword are two made from one Separation an Abyss between Saturn and the Sun the sword of discernment has created a thought wherein logic and reason bring true genius to naught what can be done now to mend this divide which the blade has created in one's own inside a true sword can heal just as well as it kills when used as a servant of the swordmaster's Will it bridges the chasm it has slashed in the sky then the swordmaster crosses the path of "gem-in-I" through the path of the sword are the two re-made one Reconciliation of subject and object is done |
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