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[ Seventeen :: 2007-02-06 ]
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with the flash of a sword
are two made from one
Separation
an Abyss between Saturn and the Sun

the sword of discernment
has created a thought
wherein logic and reason
bring true genius to naught

what can be done now
to mend this divide
which the blade has created
in one's own inside

a true sword can heal
just as well as it kills
when used as a servant
of the swordmaster's Will

it bridges the chasm
it has slashed in the sky
then the swordmaster crosses
the path of "gem-in-I"

through the path of the sword
are the two re-made one
Reconciliation
of subject and object is done


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