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| [ Venus' Flame :: 2001-12-14
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star-studded belt catches my eye shining brightly to me in the Chiba night sky speaks of another night on a beach across the sea when the same stars shone down on my lover and me I had never seen so many stars in countless nights gone by surrounding us, and binding us together, she and I one star I saw far above us that seemed to glow so bright shining down from the top of a mountain, rising into the beautiful night in the light of bright Venus we embraced in the glow of that Goddess of Love transfixed by her light and her power as she smiled down on us from above bound fast by the gift of that moment a flame passed to us from above our two hearts together ignited by the torch of the Goddess of Love that moment will live on inside me as the days and the years pass me by that night when the beautiful Venus shone down on my lover and I |
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